The Ant and his courageous feat
Once upon time in the middle of
Pacific Ocean had a boat was the place of numerous animals including an ant
very dedicated, entrepreneurial, friendly and kindly called LAMBI was the least
be of boat but the bravest. In this boat lived a fierce, dangerous, grumpy and
vile giraffe called REX had the power on all animals of boat, all animals
obeyed him, since height him generated fear and awe, when someone don’t obeyed
him, the giraffe threw overboard, but the only being that opposed to this
mandate was the ant LAMBI that said “nobody have power about nobody no matter
height him or evil all are equal”, but nobody was with her, since all the
animals of boat had a great fear of giraffe.
One day the best friend of LAMBI
called OKI the dog decide to steal the giraffe REX for will give to eat their
children, but unfortunately the giraffe learn. The giraffe kill OKI, the ant
LAMBI angry and stands up against the giraffe, but as the ant was a being too
smooth, the ant can’t do anything, as that decides to count with the voice of
the other animals, but nobody wanted to help for fear that the giraffe will
kill them as it did with OKI the dog, the ant LAMBI decide go to punish a
giraffe REX, but don’t get and is seriously wound, LAMBI swears that he will
avenge of the giraffe by the death of
his friend.
Through the ant LAMBI recovered she
planning as it will give a deserving punishment for Giraffe, the ant try to try
but don’t get it, ever the giraffe learns of the ant makes it. After of try to
try, the ant LAMBI gives up, it is very sad and furious to see that can do
nothing to defend his people of the injustices that the giraffe REX make with
the animals. In the last attempt
the full value ant LAMBI and decide to gather the all animals of boat and speak
about of inequalities and injustices that the giraffe do with the animals, the
animals reflect and decide to rise up against the Giraffe, but the animals was
very smooth for the giraffe, however was more amount, as the animals decide go
to topple the giraffe in crowd.
The next day the giraffe wake up
and see all in the boat very lonely and decide go to see what happened, when suddenly
all the animals rage against the giraffe with ropes and whips for punish the
giraffe, animals get that wanted them and the giraffe REX surrenders to them, begged the Giraffe for his life
because the animals will want to kill her, however the ant LAMBI decide no kill
her, but if you give a punishment, leave
on a desert island and abandoned located in the depths of the Pacific Ocean.
After that, the animals of boat put very happy and danced of the happiness animals
finally gave grace to the ant LAMBI for being so brave and finally all in the
boat can to do they wanted and all the
animals they lived happily ever after.
JUAN PABLO RIOS GIRON
ReplyDelete-middle of Pacific Ocean had a boat was the place of numerous animals.
CORRECTION: middle of Pacific Ocean there was a boat that has numerous animals
-LAMBI was the least be of boat but the bravest.
CORRECTION: be it is not necessary and the sentence does not make sense.
-In this boat lived a fierce
CORRECTION: In this boat used to live a fierce.
-REX had the power
CORRECTION: REX that had power
-since height him generated fear
CORRECTION: since he generated fear
-“nobody have power about nobody no matter height him or evil all are equal”
CORRECTION: “nobody has power over someone no matter how weak you are, all we are equal”
-the animals of boat had a great fear of giraffe.
CORRECTION: the animals of the boat were afraid of the giraffe
-. The giraffe kill OKI.
CORRECTION: The giraffe killed OKI
-the ant LAMBI angry and stands up against the giraffe.
CORRECTION: the ant LAMBI was angry and stood up against the giraffe
-the ant can’t do anything
CORRECTION: the ant couldn’t do anything
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