Once upon a time, in a rare and strange place called “Monolandia” existed a president named Cheresacoli who was famous for being nice with Bacterian poblation and also helped all time to Cheresacoli’s moms to reproduce, but one day the president woke up with some troubles, she lookes herself in mirror and got scared of what she saw, she was fat like an whale and she fainted. When she woke up she remember what happened and this is: Last night, the president Cheresacoli went to a party at Pulgarin’s city, and there were Pulgarin’s, Indicin’s, Corazolandia’s, Anulandia’s and Meñiquin’s mayors. While all they were dancing the president get a lot of hungry and she started eating all what she could, cakes, chips, sodas, and she ate too much that she was brought to home in a crane. When she woke up she was so sad because she wasn’t as beauty as last night and as she was someone popular, people should see h er wonderful, so she started looking for the best of the five towns that existed in Monolandia, I searched Pulgarin and did not find, I searched and Indicin either, I look like this in Anulandia Corazolandia, and no that is why his hope was determined to Meñiquin when I call to ask for the doctor This Ibarguen I answer to him and he said this to you: - From Señora Presidenta Cheresacoli and often very stopped I explain it to him that this against him and not recommend surgery, reminded her that it must be accepted as you are and not see society wants to see if you feel ugly personally, I operate it, but you do not have to face the consequences of your actions. - I get Cheresacoli when the Doctor told him to and decided Monolandia all giving testimony than the reflection happened and I leave: “- Right to the point, if you accept yourself as you are, you are happy.
By: Santiago Martinez
Posted by: Teacher Jorge (With Santiago's permission)
"see h er wonderful"
ReplyDelete- see her wonderfull
"the doctor this ibarguen"
- the doctor ibarguen
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ReplyDeleteI think that your story is very interesting and little but i find one mistake "she lookEs herself in mirror and got scared of what she saw" the correct form of this word is looks, i like your story, congratulation ;-)
ReplyDeletehi santi!
ReplyDeletemistake: president "named" Cheresacoli - correction: i think that correct form is "called".
i think that you really do an excellent work , there was a little mistakes like:
ReplyDelete"I searched" - she searched
his hope - you are talking about a woman so you use her
"this ibarguen" just write Ibarguen
" Señora Presidenta"---- Miss president
when you write the third form of look you only have to put the "S"
Hi santi interesting story that I have a correction for you and it's a misspelled word:
ReplyDeletelookes (Looked)
I laughed a lot with the story, very good.