Thursday, June 12, 2014

teacher este es el de rojo que no pudo subirlo





                                                                                             the crazy lady

On a day of hard working in the departmental library mrs. Clemencia responsible of great place that day closed the doors to the public at 8 o'clock pm, she was so exhausted.
At that moment she thought it would be good to go to the city of iron that was in her neighborhood.
When she arrived at her apartment, the first thing it does is change her clothes, throwing her purse and all things work and get comfortable to go and have some fun She called her friends and invited, were to be found in the park. When they arrived to the park they do not know what do, they were so excited that first appeared girls.

They ate ice cream, mounted in the bumper cars, were on the mechanical bill, in the pirate ship, in the castle of mirrors and the castle of terror
When they were already tired over time Clemencia was alone cause her friends were gone, took advantage and rode the only attraction that was missing.. the roller coaster.

Ohh surprise it was, when mounted in pairs and had to go play her with another woman but  this woman was thin, had blue eyes, has delicated features and a provocate lips.
She would not believe was in love.. but that was not really bad, the bad notice was that her lover was an other WOMAN!!!
She thought quickly and started the conversation, so the security was felt that what was hinting at first had felt for her; after that this day they went to lunch several times..
She so excited by the situation , thought it would be a chance to make her dream come true.. have a girlfriend!!
But after so many departures and intimate moments with his beloved she think that the idea wasn't good .
The finish that her story is that Clemencia is alone for ever and ever.. because that love that she dream never arrive in her life.... Althought still hopefull.

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  2. change the word "it" for "she"
    day for daily
    invited for invited them
    don´t forget that you are talking about actions that happened in the past
    always the adjetive precedes the noun, example "the castle of mirrors and the castle of terror" - the terror´s house , the mirror´s house.

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