Thursday, June 12, 2014

A REAL LOVE




A real love story


This is the Marlin's story, a magical an a Little strange narration about a dreamer black ghost called Marlin, he was the younguest of three brothers who were his unique company because their parents after death disappeared mysteriously, despite this Marlin grew up happily with a huge idea to feel in loved.

A day like any other Marlin was flying in the earth, looking for adventures or something different to do, suddenly he heard a girl's voice, a voice that sound sweet but weak and brittle, he decided to enter into the house and saw the most beautiful that he had ever seen in his life, while Marlin admired the girl she said:

- Hi, I'm April, who are you?

Marlin was in shock D: 

-What? Can you see me? How is possible? I'm a... I'm a.. a ghost.
- Yes I know but i don't feel worried, you look very friendly. 

Marlin was impresed and so excited, since this wonderful moment Marlin decided to visit April every day of every week; They used to talk about their dreams, likes and wishes, one of  the April's wishes was the oportunity to visit the mount everest because she would feel  what the freedom really means and the Marlin's wishes was less complicated, simple things like eat cheese or dance, things that he considered imposible because he was a ghost, April just said him that everything was posible if he wish it with the heart.

One day when Marlin was preparing himself to goes to April's house , something terrible happened, April had died :(, she never told him that she was dying, April had cancer that's the reason for her  weak and brittle voice, Marlin was devastated, April was his first love and she was dead, he flew as fast as possible without any destination but he stopped for a moment and remembered the April's wish "go to the mount everest and fell the freedom" it was like a light in his way so he flew even faster to the mount and what a surprise April was there waiting for him, she had prepared a beautiful dinner with music and melted cheese all that Marlin always had dreamed and now were a reality, Marlin was happy than never before  so he decided to declared his love to her and curiosly she felt the same so they were the perfect couple, a couple that loved the cheese and obviously with the purest love in the world, well ... in the ghost world.


THE END.




(I know that casper isn't black but is just  like I imagine Marlin :( )

1 comment:

  1. Angel good story but you know that the ending was not to my taste that made ​​me sad Hahaha. I only have two corrections for you and maybe are words that are not well written as: impresed (impressed) and younguest (youngest)

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