Wednesday, June 11, 2014

geovany ibarguen historia


The Ant and his courageous feat

Once upon time in the middle of Pacific Ocean had a boat was the place of numerous animals including an ant very dedicated, entrepreneurial, friendly and kindly called LAMBI was the least be of boat but the bravest. In this boat lived a fierce, dangerous, grumpy and vile giraffe called REX had the power on all animals of boat, all animals obeyed him, since height him generated fear and awe, when someone don’t obeyed him, the giraffe threw overboard, but the only being that opposed to this mandate was the ant LAMBI that said “nobody have power about nobody no matter height him or evil all are equal”, but nobody was with her, since all the animals of boat had a great fear of giraffe.
One day the best friend of LAMBI called OKI the dog decide to steal the giraffe REX for will give to eat their children, but unfortunately the giraffe learn. The giraffe kill OKI, the ant LAMBI angry and stands up against the giraffe, but as the ant was a being too smooth, the ant can’t do anything, as that decides to count with the voice of the other animals, but nobody wanted to help for fear that the giraffe will kill them as it did with OKI the dog, the ant LAMBI decide go to punish a giraffe REX, but don’t get and is seriously wound, LAMBI swears that he will avenge of the giraffe  by the death of his friend.
Through the ant LAMBI recovered she planning as it will give a deserving punishment for Giraffe, the ant try to try but don’t get it, ever the giraffe learns of the ant makes it. After of try to try, the ant LAMBI gives up, it is very sad and furious to see that can do nothing to defend his people of the injustices that the giraffe REX make with the animals. In the last attempt the full value ant LAMBI and decide to gather the all animals of boat and speak about of inequalities and injustices that the giraffe do with the animals, the animals reflect and decide to rise up against the Giraffe, but the animals was very smooth for the giraffe, however was more amount, as the animals decide go to topple the giraffe in crowd.
The next day the giraffe wake up and see all in the boat very lonely and decide go to see what happened, when suddenly all the animals rage against the giraffe with ropes and whips for punish the giraffe, animals get that wanted them and the giraffe REX surrenders to them, begged the Giraffe for his life because the animals will want to kill her, however the ant LAMBI decide no kill her, but  if you give a punishment, leave on a desert island and abandoned located in the depths of the Pacific Ocean.


After that, the animals of boat  put very happy and danced of the happiness animals finally gave grace to the ant LAMBI for being so brave and finally all in the boat  can to do they wanted and all the animals they lived happily ever after.

1 comment:

  1. JUAN PABLO RIOS GIRON

    -middle of Pacific Ocean had a boat was the place of numerous animals.
    CORRECTION: middle of Pacific Ocean there was a boat that has numerous animals

    -LAMBI was the least be of boat but the bravest.
    CORRECTION: be it is not necessary and the sentence does not make sense.

    -In this boat lived a fierce
    CORRECTION: In this boat used to live a fierce.

    -REX had the power
    CORRECTION: REX that had power

    -since height him generated fear
    CORRECTION: since he generated fear

    -“nobody have power about nobody no matter height him or evil all are equal”
    CORRECTION: “nobody has power over someone no matter how weak you are, all we are equal”

    -the animals of boat had a great fear of giraffe.
    CORRECTION: the animals of the boat were afraid of the giraffe

    -. The giraffe kill OKI.
    CORRECTION: The giraffe killed OKI

    -the ant LAMBI angry and stands up against the giraffe.
    CORRECTION: the ant LAMBI was angry and stood up against the giraffe

    -the ant can’t do anything
    CORRECTION: the ant couldn’t do anything

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