Thursday, June 12, 2014

The dolphin patrieus.

Patrieus dolphin was the most admired of all the ocean because it had the ability to talk to humans. It was so cool that I could swim with the sharks. One day the sharks were hungry and asked the favor of patrieus to cook because it had long fins. They wanted rice! ... Sharks did not know they wanted with rice! so the dolphin who had studied marine food began to help.
Patrieus said: - Rice with Shrimp -
                -Rice with sea horse-
                -Octopus...Or maybe tuna-
                -TUNA!?- Asked sharks.
in the sea tuna catch was very difficult to eat so I ate very little.

Patrieus sharks promised his friends make the best tuna rice with the new culinary invention!. When I saw a group of tuna observed that were silly and decided to deceive them, caught the attention of them saying that he could talk to Human sardines stopped and listened to the last word patrieus, Dolphin sack a network and the shot catching enough to rice. Arriving chef wore his suit but there was a problem! had no fire and inform their friends without pressing sharks and they told patrieus: - do not worry we'll go where humans and frighten to get your attention and your talking with your powers to humans tell them to help
-GREAT!-patrieus said.
They swam to the surface and did what they said but humans only managed to give them a box with enough oxygen, so patrieus took two corals fire and lit them.

He started with his magic a pinch of algae and more ingredients that were able to make the best rice with tuna ocean, it was so delicious that your friends Sharks asked the favor to friends fishes to make the most beautiful and striking elegant restaurant was worthy of a plate like that, the restaurant was more interested in the whole ocean being patrieus a dolphin that has the ability to speak I wanted to light a fire at a fancy restaurant

1 comment:

  1. linis i think that your story was very fun, i really like it but you did mistakes like:
    " I ate very little" --- i didn´t eat frequently
    sometimes your narrator is omniscent and other times is like the principal character


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