Thursday, June 12, 2014

The tragic life of Cinderella  

Once upon a time a millionaire girl called Cinderella who never had an end, her unique problem was to have lost to all her family in a tornado and be betrayed by the person who more wanted, this great hatred I take her to a terrible conclusion that was to conquer up to the tiniest living being of the planet. One evening in her daily routine of going to her basement that is located in the depth of the land in her mansion in the dangerous and wide wild jungle, she met a great and pleasing surprise it turns out that in one of her cameras that certainly has spread by the whole jungle she found a strange and weird creature, she was not distinguishing well his identity because she forgotten to change the filter of the above mentioned camera and the vision was not very good so to rectify her finding she directed towards the jungle in her powerful motorcycle to search to the above mentioned specimen.
On having come to the place that her radar of high technology is indicated it was the creature astonished on having found a boy totally without clothing her shame it was too much that up to her cheeks became red, the boy had a neutral look as if it was not important for him to cover nudity and in a wild jungle, and what she more was afraid was for real making, without realizing her eyes got lost in that of the boy and corn in a kind of spell, that of the love. Cinderella could not believe that her feelings still were active since for her so frightening past she was treating of that any situation of the exterior was affecting in the most minimal thing, but apparently she was totally wrong and in the long time that her senses were suppressed when they escaped again for the boy they did it and from his higher point.
 But this one was a great problem because if she loved a person she would have piety of all at the time so ¿Would her dream of conquering to the world make real? This it was her question after having run desperate of such a meeting and reflecting, leave the boy and without looking behind leave him in other words she decided to have a slight recollection of him in her memory, nevertheless continue with her desire to conquer the world using to the animals as her principal force.
 So that, use all the money that she had inherited from her family in a magnificent investigation with wild animals and obtained all the existing possible tools that they were allowing her to conquer of attache from the cosmos, travel up to the center of the land and install satellites in the moon and mars, assembled the most wise scientists and force them to realize what she wanted by means of the satellites to dominate the mind of all the alive beings, also assembled her army of animals and began her trip for all the earth. Some years later it was not remaining not even an alone alive being with own will, they only, were not stopping pronounce QUEEN CINDERELLA, QUEEN CINDERELLA for the reason of which Cinderella was not allowing them to think only she was allowing them to realize the small action to breathe, In addition and without any piety she was handling by means of machines every impulse of them bodies, every emotion and was taking care with all her attention to more important THE LOVE.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Cinthya
    i like comment you about something mistakes that see...

    mistakes:
    "Once upon a time a millionaire girl called Cinderella who never had an end"
    correction: i think that you should cut up that ideas for commas = "once upon a time, millionaire girl called Cinderella, whoe never had and end".

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  2. continue...
    mitakes: this great hatred "I take" her to a terrible conclusion - correction: this grat hatred "took" her to a terrible conclusion.
    mistake: she met a great and pleasing surprise -correction: she " found an" great and pleasing surprise.
    mistake: she was not distinguishing well "his" identity - correction: "her" why are you talking of she not he.
    mistake: on having come - correction: to get.
    mistake: on having found - correction: to find.
    mistake: her cheeks "became" red - correction: become.
    mistake: and what she more was afraid was for real making -correction: and "that" she more "afraid was" (eliminate a was).
    mistake: got lost in that of the boy and "corn" -correction: ¿"corn"? ¿why?

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